Title DIRECTOR, DIRECTOR OF PHOTOGRAPHY
EXT. STREET—-NIGHT
MURDER 1 takes place (LI strangles using CHAIN)
TITLE—- Actor... (James Dylan)
INT. House, RECORDING STUDIO-—NIGHT
MURDER 2 takes place (LI turns off lights OFF suddenly kills agent with a GUN)
TITLE—Actor... (LI)
EXT. ALLEYWAY—-NIGHT
MURDER 3 takes place (in ALLEY, LI impersonates a PROSTITUTE walks up to car talks to agent. They mouth. She enters car. She leans over and STABS him)
TITLE—-FATAL SCORN
INT. CORNER SHOP—-NIGHT
JAMES walks into SHOP, picks up carton of milk and sugar
INT. EVA’S OFFICE—-NIGHT
EVA
Where is he?
EXT. OUTSIDE CORNER SHOP—NIGHT
LI
In a shop.
INT. CORNER SHOP—-NIGHT
SHOP KEEPER
That will be 80p.
JAMES
Here you go, how’s the family?
SHOP KEEPER
There good thanks.
SHOP KEEPER hands over change.
JAMES
Cheers mate.
JAMES EXITS.
INT. EVA’S OFFICE—-NIGHT
EVA’S office is her study at home. She is clenching a PHOTO of all her colleges in her hand looking at her next target. (JAMES DILLAN)
EVA
Make it quick
EVA hangs up and sits on chair in SILENCE.
EXT. PARK—-NIGHT
LI back into some bushes, JAMES crosses road and notices LI in BUSHES. DISCRETLY and SLOWLY reaches for his GUN and continues walking. LI creeps up from behind and attacks.
Fight scenes takes place, LI RETREATS and leaves behind a note. James notices note. A piece of paper FALLS OUT of LI’S pocket. JAMES DILLION picks it up.
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My treatment
ReplyDeletebefore making the screenplay we were required to pick a genre and create a treatment. we decided to have an action film and below is the treatment.
There is a group of retired agents. This was a very high action team and our "bad guy" (in this case its a bad girl, a twist we put in) was in fact the only female team member. Since she was the only female she was treated unfairly and the men were sexist towards her. This caused a slow buring anger within her that she desired revenge on the men that had made her life a misery, so she changed her image and became vindictive. She started to kill each agent off one by one (film starts). The next murder(James, shop murder) however did not go to plan, the agent fought back and got away. He then gathered the rest of his team and started investigating who the assassin could be. After a while they found who it was, and horrified it was one of their own they created a plot to kill her, they could not let her keep killing. After much preperation they went through with the plan to set her up and they succeeded. The Woman was killed. The fil then ends with photos of the happy times as a team, pinned to cork board, moving between each one. It then fades out to reveal a picture of James and Eva in the centre of the board, before fading to nothing.